大家好:500Please respect copyright.PENANAcbSR1Gy5Cv
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我非常喜歡蕭麗紅女士所撰寫的《千江有水千江月》這本書,因此反覆讀了很多次,每次幾乎都有不同的感觸與體悟。500Please respect copyright.PENANAzq4PrSDMXi
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第一次閱讀這本小說是在剛進五專時,記得讀完小說的那天,我就期許自己這輩子也能寫出一本像這樣有著細膩情感的小說來!500Please respect copyright.PENANA8O2SuQ4cD5
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因此,我非常喜歡用一些日常的瑣碎將讀者帶入情境,並且喜歡用樸實的文字表達情感。500Please respect copyright.PENANAllN461oVf5
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我常覺得情緒是一個點,是可以用一個句子傳達給讀者的。500Please respect copyright.PENANAKOQX5IysMu
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然而,要讓讀者反過來對故事產生情感需要的則是更立體的東西,至少是一個面,一個讓讀者能夠進行投射的面。500Please respect copyright.PENANAC6tf7wNtEf
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這樣的面需要依賴數個段落、情節或者數個章節才足以堆砌和鋪陳。500Please respect copyright.PENANAOCYFT2juYD
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就像生活一樣,不管是愛也好、恨也好,許多情緒的觸發可能是長久的累積或者忍耐!500Please respect copyright.PENANAvT4avxFFLF
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因此,情感也需要起承轉合才能具有立體結構。500Please respect copyright.PENANAQmCPeA8yjE
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小說其實與生活密不可分!這句話並不是指把個人當成主角寫入小說,而是從生活中蒐集那些曾觸動自己的行為、畫面或者故事來作為小說的創作靈感,並且從中模擬情感,自然學會鋪陳。500Please respect copyright.PENANA08exjCPvDO
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這就是今天與大家分享的寫作心得,希望能幫助到對情感鋪陳有疑惑的朋友。感謝大家今天的收聽與收看。謝謝大家。500Please respect copyright.PENANAU4scu8tpVo
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小說的情感鋪陳
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