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解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
ENTRY #3
Author: W.H.
Published:
Apr 30, 2023
解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
Published:
Apr 30, 2023
ENTRY #3
【示範】摩天之輪
Author: W.H.
Published:
Apr 30, 2023
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先把規則寫在前頭，每篇參賽作品必須包括三要素：

① 用來解構碰撞的唐詩/宋詞/古今名言原句；

如果不是整首詩詞，放上要用的詩/詞句即可。

② 原句的出處，包括：➀ 原詩詞的標題 ➁ 原詩詞的作者。

(如果古今名言，真的找不到出處，也請註明「目前出處未明」)

③ 參賽者自己的新詩作品：詩題可以另起，或是沿用原詩詞的標題。

(我建議詩題另起，畢竟經過解構碰撞，原詩題不一定合用；不然，就像洛夫直接以「唐詩解構：ＯＯ的ＸＸ」為名亦可)

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必須包括上述三要素：原詩/詞/句、出處(原標題和原作者)、參賽者的詩作，格式不拘，要放在最前面、最後面、中間也都不限，只要能讓人找到就行了。

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【示範開始】

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[原詩句]  from〈宣州謝朓樓餞別校書叔雲〉by 李白

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「俱懷逸興壯思飛，欲上青天攬明月」

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[我的詩作：摩天之輪]

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距離天空最近的地方

可以摩挲夜景

月亮為他歌唱

城市在他的腳下

睥睨是視線的方向

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眾星閃耀著光芒

輪流圍繞在他身旁

在天之頂

他喊聲「Action！」

調度世界

看起來易如反掌

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天空越來越遙遠

城市越來越明顯

摩天之輪將他吐出

當雙腳踏上地面

他又變回無人觀賞的

默片。

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