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解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
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May 3, 2023
解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
Published:
May 3, 2023
ENTRY #15
歸不去
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May 3, 2023
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No Plagiarism!HqeoctVeqS5oCKg0plfHposted on PＥNAＮＡ

［原句］

「我欲乘風歸去，又恐瓊樓玉宇，高處不勝寒。 起舞弄清影，何似在人間？」—蘇軾《水調歌頭》

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［新詩解構］

星子通通死去了，剩月亮

勉強用7%的光  維持夜的尊嚴。

風方才來過，

數落我憂愁和脂肪太重，

留我在人間  繼續仰望天空。

526Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgSvtf7PNpp

每個建案

細看都叫巴別

比天空更高的是樓頂，

比樓頂更高的是房價

今年茅房還留得住，

再隔年

或許只剩數片磚瓦。

閉上眼

立起腳尖

驚起鵝毛般的芭蕾，

千萬注意別踏壞精緻的生存空間。

526Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUbfzmHOu8i

五光十色的影子撩開聲帶

火星太遠、月球太冷，

人間是回不去的天上，

天上是到不了的人間，

繼續跳吧跳吧。反正

526Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZCa2HVgkoG

天上

人間

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倒立即是

526Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIEjuOUXrrd

人間

天上

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好好玩的創挑，謝謝創挑主

216.73.216.253

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