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解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
ENTRY #14
Author: 凌曉潔
Published:
May 3, 2023
解構碰撞的新詩創作：唐詩宋詞 and / or 古今名言(上)
Published:
May 3, 2023
ENTRY #14
孤芳
Author: 凌曉潔
Published:
May 3, 2023
1 Min Read
150 Words
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【古詩解構】晉  陶淵明《飲酒  其五》

【原作】「採菊東籬下，悠然見南山」

【解構】

曾經    你採擷我

在南山下    東籬旁

並將我的高雅與神韻    一一的收藏

當時    無人能知你情操    無人真解你志向

只有我    堅定地守在你身旁

而你臨終前    囑我延續你的精神

我也不曾遺忘

然而    是幾千年了啊

歲月悠悠流逝

我仍傲然挺立

卻再也覓不著舊時的痕跡

只能在九月霜飛的日子裡

遙念你我

初次的相遇

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