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大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection407PENANAzLISnnstCM 維尼
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〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection407PENANAFGovKjvjzx 維尼
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已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection407PENANAzSIwWINj9B 維尼
迷信著美8964 copyright protection407PENANA1X0wkKGrOB 維尼
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守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection407PENANAjyH91jfLNz 維尼
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心中有神8964 copyright protection407PENANABEB9K2dxux 維尼
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諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection407PENANAYLvuJJvbLI 維尼
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有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection407PENANAioFhFK9n7j 維尼
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同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection407PENANAG1wNl66GNA 維尼
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〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection407PENANA6mMkT69xJ6 維尼
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有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection407PENANA3eQjsZdS4G 維尼
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有一種月色的朦朧 有一種星沉荷池的古典8964 copyright protection407PENANABdEcfjuHme 維尼
越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection407PENANAk3yJKFt81X 維尼
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一朵靜觀天宇而不事喧嚷的蓮。8964 copyright protection407PENANAb8jPkMp8C2 維尼
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仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection407PENANApfX8ViE6ng 維尼
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非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection407PENANA63MCtldeuu 維尼
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〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection407PENANAVu7HTEZpvn 維尼
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Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection407PENANAFUk3qBA0CP 維尼
底下蟲魚蝦,洋洋擎舉8964 copyright protection407PENANAgCKZAfwu5b 維尼
屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection407PENANA3cH1yEQ64k 維尼
無懼那風雨豔陽8964 copyright protection407PENANAOCJ60d9UPS 維尼
Ta最棒8964 copyright protection407PENANA2FcR35PrCw 維尼
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Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection407PENANAtI3ZgtWNr8 維尼
同流不合污,洶洶潑灑8964 copyright protection407PENANASqI3iHwSUV 維尼
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然而眾人沒感覺8964 copyright protection407PENANAmEDPf1GFoK 維尼
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Ta自視是一朵蓮花,優雅高尚8964 copyright protection407PENANASAnfn9x8DL 維尼
視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection407PENANAjH0X0lHTKm 維尼
屬於自己的度量8964 copyright protection407PENANAQd6eR6XSK0 維尼
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Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection407PENANAWGnMum71iu 維尼
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朵朵都是8964 copyright protection407PENANABZ564PNx9L 維尼
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大方親和模樣8964 copyright protection407PENANAUVU9odhGHU 維尼
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結不了蓮8964 copyright protection407PENANA7qjhltdV8p 維尼
子8964 copyright protection407PENANAHB2HXnMDMi 維尼
的8964 copyright protection407PENANAP2Y0E7L4BA 維尼
塑8964 copyright protection407PENANAGeUsh4N4oW 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection407PENANA8lm8OPeZaS 維尼
王8964 copyright protection407PENANA9JecVKn3Mr 維尼
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(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection407PENANAWEjQcjmujW 維尼
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兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection407PENANAl7ajkTzP1p 維尼
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然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection407PENANAShqcPBT8Kz 維尼
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就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection407PENANAVx7VIqT1KI 維尼
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這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection407PENANArbCQ71G1re 維尼
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不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection407PENANA67I9mpYIvE 維尼
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也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection407PENANAqVfkTlDSTo 維尼
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或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection407PENANA6Bgrq5rhTY 維尼
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由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection407PENANAmeZVjbLaIL 維尼
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用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection407PENANA3yTwGnDhvp 維尼
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附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection407PENANABDkArZVhEk 維尼
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【我寫的〈蓮花〉原詩出處】8964 copyright protection407PENANAqmW6G0Ndl1 維尼
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