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大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection405PENANAS5YnwHzZjO 維尼
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〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection405PENANAuux0t23aFD 維尼
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已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection405PENANAwZhlyZ8sfe 維尼
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最初的煩惱,最後的玩具8964 copyright protection405PENANAW1KYhUxBHK 維尼
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我的卻拒絕遠行,我願在此8964 copyright protection405PENANANJxYMjsWTd 維尼
伴每一朵蓮8964 copyright protection405PENANAVt8wLX2y5K 維尼
守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection405PENANAsqznFVKabA 維尼
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諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection405PENANApbq6mKNLOH 維尼
你可能想像8964 copyright protection405PENANAaMypAg9rFH 維尼
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有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection405PENANAL1Lv2wwPPQ 維尼
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同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection405PENANAdJ7VAcMfZb 維尼
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〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection405PENANAxVA9vNTKmw 維尼
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有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection405PENANAq5ysV8ZcQj 維尼
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在星月之下獨自思吟。8964 copyright protection405PENANALynW54UQ6U 維尼
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有一種月色的朦朧 有一種星沉荷池的古典8964 copyright protection405PENANAgraJCELubZ 維尼
越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection405PENANAm9zWYs9RjF 維尼
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仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection405PENANAnnq8KpysH9 維尼
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非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection405PENANAGQVKMVp4Bk 維尼
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〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection405PENANA7osgWSP1Ay 維尼
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Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection405PENANAkzHOFrm752 維尼
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屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection405PENANAsmaV3kGv3h 維尼
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Ta最棒8964 copyright protection405PENANAgaEass6KzV 維尼
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Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection405PENANAKkPBw8X7ik 維尼
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視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection405PENANAIV1KibUFA3 維尼
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正因腹笥窘得很8964 copyright protection405PENANA5xzxlXjfrv 維尼
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Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection405PENANA2jhILDoqNF 維尼
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朵朵都是8964 copyright protection405PENANAjXOKC6jV4Z 維尼
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塑8964 copyright protection405PENANAAAf6ROgFWy 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection405PENANAPYFgHMqhi7 維尼
王8964 copyright protection405PENANAkwrTrVd1q8 維尼
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(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection405PENANARHs5nVO50K 維尼
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兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection405PENANAj4p3LJQMQe 維尼
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然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection405PENANAjEfnp92fLi 維尼
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就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection405PENANAbDXnaCVAcZ 維尼
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這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection405PENANA4kfg20L6hc 維尼
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不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection405PENANAa8A1zNH2Bj 維尼
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也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection405PENANA1Kvy0ovvfO 維尼
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或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection405PENANAuY8mzLpDLc 維尼
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由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection405PENANA7uRRgTJFNJ 維尼
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用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection405PENANA9GJccZyV18 維尼
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附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection405PENANAwjYUlWd7J9 維尼
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【我寫的〈蓮花〉原詩出處】8964 copyright protection405PENANASLHZAn8C0n 維尼
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