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大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection392PENANAsWWpnZQp1R 維尼
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〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection392PENANA9eZ8DHqiI7 維尼
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已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection392PENANAA6kgQL3ZcW 維尼
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想起愛情已死了很久8964 copyright protection392PENANAQOLogfmpJu 維尼
想起愛情8964 copyright protection392PENANADGNFqhsOlG 維尼
最初的煩惱,最後的玩具8964 copyright protection392PENANAMVX2XRm3KT 維尼
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想起西方,水仙也渴斃了8964 copyright protection392PENANAbScBnd00Vt 維尼
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仍有人喜歡8964 copyright protection392PENANAPWLAUbeq9t 維尼
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我的卻拒絕遠行,我願在此8964 copyright protection392PENANAaDw18pOzet 維尼
伴每一朵蓮8964 copyright protection392PENANAiJ2rEXPuN6 維尼
守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection392PENANAPwqwRe8jns 維尼
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是以東方甚遠,東方甚近8964 copyright protection392PENANAhbpdzqjPNU 維尼
心中有神8964 copyright protection392PENANAu1tmbi6ghL 維尼
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諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection392PENANAL6xxQbxpG9 維尼
你可能想像8964 copyright protection392PENANABAauYpmrpM 維尼
美在其中,神在其上8964 copyright protection392PENANAOjSJiyRbSU 維尼
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有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection392PENANAEJxMGL1fct 維尼
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同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection392PENANAVyvidbzkv8 維尼
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〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection392PENANAEyimKGElSZ 維尼
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有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection392PENANAGtyFAU9GS2 維尼
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可傳誦的是芬美 一朵青蓮8964 copyright protection392PENANAwkhqxCeIHw 維尼
有一種月色的朦朧 有一種星沉荷池的古典8964 copyright protection392PENANAGThtmCTdRt 維尼
越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection392PENANAzoFoP1xQHY 維尼
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仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection392PENANAmUrGeoem3i 維尼
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非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection392PENANAxP3LUcMkvX 維尼
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〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection392PENANAMjQo6YVJT7 維尼
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Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection392PENANAn6oXYANwku 維尼
底下蟲魚蝦,洋洋擎舉8964 copyright protection392PENANAKSLeiKlcZl 維尼
屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection392PENANAJHpYzQjt49 維尼
無懼那風雨豔陽8964 copyright protection392PENANA9ACptAkzaN 維尼
Ta最棒8964 copyright protection392PENANAH6F51U2xuY 維尼
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Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection392PENANAOKcaevBrHW 維尼
同流不合污,洶洶潑灑8964 copyright protection392PENANA5FokZzpeXx 維尼
屬於自己的體香8964 copyright protection392PENANA1Bv9RgI6e0 維尼
然而眾人沒感覺8964 copyright protection392PENANAK1aE1x1YJ5 維尼
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Ta自視是一朵蓮花,優雅高尚8964 copyright protection392PENANAIhLeKR16NW 維尼
視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection392PENANAu50X6tRgE9 維尼
屬於自己的度量8964 copyright protection392PENANAoBzHOCkJOM 維尼
正因腹笥窘得很8964 copyright protection392PENANA2LSSqjcqmv 維尼
空蕩蕩8964 copyright protection392PENANAUIzEvkFR5t 維尼
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Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection392PENANAITSpayLtD9 維尼
聖良且有光,汲汲營造8964 copyright protection392PENANAa1hScP1asE 維尼
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朵朵都是8964 copyright protection392PENANAeTmdz9Gst6 維尼
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大方親和模樣8964 copyright protection392PENANAYeZundgVkk 維尼
冠冕堂皇8964 copyright protection392PENANAFXsfdl2xYm 維尼
結不了蓮8964 copyright protection392PENANAXYznyhTaqo 維尼
子8964 copyright protection392PENANAsZJId5qmed 維尼
的8964 copyright protection392PENANAKcKVP5PQvW 維尼
塑8964 copyright protection392PENANAm8uHtldma5 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection392PENANAVr6BQTuQBX 維尼
王8964 copyright protection392PENANA5FhCU6Leb1 維尼
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(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection392PENANA2z7X3y2qcy 維尼
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兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection392PENANAaOExn2HCOo 維尼
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然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection392PENANAab98vB81Jq 維尼
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就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection392PENANATvJVu7KLpm 維尼
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這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection392PENANAYvpzQoGFMQ 維尼
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不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection392PENANAmudzhucgXf 維尼
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也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection392PENANABVPxEan8O4 維尼
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或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection392PENANAOvHHtDn3vK 維尼
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由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection392PENANAazrLzRqDdC 維尼
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用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection392PENANAuLDiNntf2X 維尼
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附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection392PENANAqqbNFobKrr 維尼
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