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簡潔還是堆疊
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朱諾(Juno)
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嗨嗨 我是修了小說創作課的朱諾。
身為西洋咖,我熱愛翻譯小說。而常看歐美的讀者一定不陌生,小說家時常用譬喻,句子堆砌且詞藻華美。(不知道是不是因為metaphor 隱喻/暗喻的緣故)
我的老師則希望我們精簡。不要堆疊(少說廢話),文章偶爾有一兩句漂亮的句子,不要通篇雕琢。少寫心理描述,多些事件推動。(沒錯,我就說被說太疊加、廢話一堆的人)
今天想問問大家喜歡華麗的文風還是簡約,習慣哪一種模式。
&會不會覺得華美的文章妨礙閱讀?
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ʚ ᴍɪs ɞ
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我喜歡適當的堆疊
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穆夙芽
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我喜歡在長篇小說中,情感描述的時候多說一點,比較偏向浪漫主義時期的那種描寫風格,用聲音、味道、觸覺等等去強化小說的整體感受,讓讀者完全浸入小說那樣。不過也看情況,如果是推理性質的小說,可能就不能太多,而是著重在描寫一些之後能夠往回推的點;而冒險性質的小說可能也不會太多,主要應該是看作者自己想呈現的那個面貌。不過適量的堆疊會比完全的簡潔更通用一點。
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身為西洋咖,我熱愛翻譯小說。而常看歐美的讀者一定不陌生,小說家時常用譬喻,句子堆砌且詞藻華美。(不知道是不是因為metaphor 隱喻/暗喻的緣故)
我的老師則希望我們精簡。不要堆疊(少說廢話),文章偶爾有一兩句漂亮的句子,不要通篇雕琢。少寫心理描述,多些事件推動。(沒錯,我就說被說太疊加、廢話一堆的人)
今天想問問大家喜歡華麗的文風還是簡約,習慣哪一種模式。
&會不會覺得華美的文章妨礙閱讀?