Title of Piece:Under the Same Moon (preface posted on my account here and on fictionpress) Genre:general for now rating:pg for now but may go up to T Summary:Cheyenne has seen how the world has started to go to ruin, as it pits brother against brother, religion against religion, and truth against popularity. She and a group of friends decide it's time to show the world that despite the differences, at the end of the day, everyone is human, and everyone lived under the same moon. Can they succeed or it is too late to change the world?(can give more specific details, just ask)
Looking for a beta who can/will: help with plot issues and plot holes, catch small mistakes that may come up, and with dialog
preferred form of communication:anything i guess
preferred form of beta'ing:any way will do deadline:not really sure how long it will be yet, but it will be a few chapters. I'm not in any rush as far as this is concerned, just as long as its a decent time
Summary/Description: Nate Emerald, and his sisters, Annie and Connie, have lived there whole lives inside a huge castle, not allowed to leave their rooms. Their only friends are mysterious creatures known as Familiars, which they have the power to talk too. Made to believe that the Familiars are treated terribly by people, Nate swore to save them all.
On his sixteenth birthday, Nate was crowned King of the NWO; a union formed to save Familiars from people. Now Nate, along with his sisters, must go on a journey to awaken an ancient Basilisk, and use it's power to create a New World Order.
But is the world really as bad as he thinks?
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Something overall
Preferred Form of Communication: PM or Email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Anything will do
Deadline: I want to post a chapter per week
Name:timothyscifi
Title of Piece:The end to angels
Genre(s): Mystery/horror/end of the world piece
Rating: It will be in later chapter m for mature for themes including sex,violence, and people push to the breaking point
Summary/Description:Where does one man's view begin or end? How do you know what is real? what is the nature of choice? Soon one man finds the world has literally gone to hell and he has to deal with the end to angels
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Honestly, have at it. I'm writer not a editor. I want the story to look professional and not like (let face it) amateur writer with to much time on his hands.
Preferred Form of Communication: W/e
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: W/e
Deadline: forever or end of time which ever comes first
Name: Wizpen
Title of Piece: The Librarian
Genre(s): General, Adventure, Mistery
Rating: PG-13, maybe I'll add in a couple of adult material near the middle to the end and then change the rating to T or M idk yet.
Summary:
Jefferson Anderson is an ordinary librarian at his family company's grand library. He had closed most of himself from the outside environment until one fateful call from a friend who hasn't lost touch.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: general review and critics need, many thanks m8.
Communication: PM Penana
Form of Beta-ing: I don't understand a clue about beta-ing so whatever is fine
Deadline: Not fixed. Many chapters are to be expected though
Name: Joey
Title of Piece:Survivor
Genre(s):young adult, dark, angst
Rating:r
Summary/Description:Once upon a time there was a boy named Joseph. His life wasn't happy, it was dark, depressing and filled with pain. However, this isn't his story, his is too much to tell, too dark for most. What is written here is the truth, if you choose to see it. If not, see it as a depressing story about child abuse and what it means to be a survivor.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: grammar, spelling, structure, who won't judge and who can be patient with me
Preferred Form of Communication: penana pm or email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Google Docs or penana beta system
Deadline: no deadline as long as it's in a resonable time frame
Name: James
Title of Piece: Acolytes: A Caste for Control
Genre(s): Science Fiction, Dystopia, Action, Young Adult, Military
Link: https://www.penana.com/story/1290/acolytes-a-caste-for-control/toc
Rating: PG - PG13+
Summary/Description: Check the link above.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Plot holes, Characters, other issues you notice
Preferred Form of Communication: Penana or email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Email.
Deadline: None.
I'm happy to trade critiques. My story is 86K, so I'm willing to critique stories of similar length. I prefer Science Fiction, but I'm open-minded. I generally take a couple of months to get feedback to you, so I would expect a similar response.
Name: Eric
Title of Piece: Virulent
Genre(s): horror suspense
Rating:pg13
Summary/Description:
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Overall impression. Not entirely focused on grammar right now, just, does it make sense, can you follow it?
Preferred Form of Communication: Email [email protected]
http://www.penana.com/story/1604/virulent/toc
Name: Ana
Title of Piece: Fallen (and the sequel)
Genre(s): Horror, Suspense
Rating: PG13
Summary/Description: A story about a girl who gets entangled into a lot of trouble. The story is not only about her, though. It has some true facts about religion and Hell.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: I am not very good with grammar. It seems no matter how much I correct, there is still something missing. I also have a hard time with some scenes (for example, the fighting scenes).
Preferred Form of Communication: Email or Penana PM
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: I don't really care.
Deadline: There is no deadline
Name: EnnaStark (my pseudonym, call me Enna if you'd like)
Title of Piece: Metal and Muscle
Genre(s): Steampunk, Dystopian, Adventure, Romance, Young Adult (mixed together)
Rating: PG13
Summary/Description: Flair is well known throughout Pangea Ultimatum as being the best mechanic, captain, and pilot. Of course, she's also a cyborg. When a handsome stranger named Kane requests her services, she's pulled into a government conspiracy, biological testing, and a war between people and monsters. Trapped in a web of lies, will she be able to trust anyone or will she be stabbed in the back by the people she trusted most?
Plunge into the world of Pangea Ultimatum in the first book of the Clockwork Chronicles. (Copied from story description)
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: I want the reader to look at the overall story, but also grammatical and sentence phrasing. I also want to here how I can better improve my ability to slowly write character growth and how to better develop my characters.
Preferred Form of Communication: PM on Penana, review on Penana, or email to my professional email ([email protected]).
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: On Penana
Deadline: Whenever you'd like to read it, sooner rather than later. I need to know if I should even continue it.
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Name:Rose
Title of Piece:Under the Same Moon (preface posted on my account here and on fictionpress)
Genre:general for now
rating:pg for now but may go up to T
Summary:Cheyenne has seen how the world has started to go to ruin, as it pits brother against brother, religion against religion, and truth against popularity. She and a group of friends decide it's time to show the world that despite the differences, at the end of the day, everyone is human, and everyone lived under the same moon. Can they succeed or it is too late to change the world?(can give more specific details, just ask)
Looking for a beta who can/will: help with plot issues and plot holes, catch small mistakes that may come up, and with dialog
preferred form of communication:anything i guess
preferred form of beta'ing:any way will do
deadline:not really sure how long it will be yet, but it will be a few chapters. I'm not in any rush as far as this is concerned, just as long as its a decent time
Title of Piece: The Beginning of the End
Genre(s): Fantasy, Family, Dystopian
Rating: PG 13
Summary/Description: Nate Emerald, and his sisters, Annie and Connie, have lived there whole lives inside a huge castle, not allowed to leave their rooms. Their only friends are mysterious creatures known as Familiars, which they have the power to talk too. Made to believe that the Familiars are treated terribly by people, Nate swore to save them all.
On his sixteenth birthday, Nate was crowned King of the NWO; a union formed to save Familiars from people. Now Nate, along with his sisters, must go on a journey to awaken an ancient Basilisk, and use it's power to create a New World Order.
But is the world really as bad as he thinks?
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Something overall
Preferred Form of Communication: PM or Email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Anything will do
Deadline: I want to post a chapter per week
Title of Piece:The end to angels
Genre(s): Mystery/horror/end of the world piece
Rating: It will be in later chapter m for mature for themes including sex,violence, and people push to the breaking point
Summary/Description:Where does one man's view begin or end? How do you know what is real? what is the nature of choice? Soon one man finds the world has literally gone to hell and he has to deal with the end to angels
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Honestly, have at it. I'm writer not a editor. I want the story to look professional and not like (let face it) amateur writer with to much time on his hands.
Preferred Form of Communication: W/e
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: W/e
Deadline: forever or end of time which ever comes first
Authors: N/a
Title of Piece: The Librarian
Genre(s): General, Adventure, Mistery
Rating: PG-13, maybe I'll add in a couple of adult material near the middle to the end and then change the rating to T or M idk yet.
Summary:
Jefferson Anderson is an ordinary librarian at his family company's grand library. He had closed most of himself from the outside environment until one fateful call from a friend who hasn't lost touch.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: general review and critics need, many thanks m8.
Communication: PM Penana
Form of Beta-ing: I don't understand a clue about beta-ing so whatever is fine
Deadline: Not fixed. Many chapters are to be expected though
Much obliged
Title of Piece:Survivor
Genre(s):young adult, dark, angst
Rating:r
Summary/Description:Once upon a time there was a boy named Joseph. His life wasn't happy, it was dark, depressing and filled with pain. However, this isn't his story, his is too much to tell, too dark for most. What is written here is the truth, if you choose to see it. If not, see it as a depressing story about child abuse and what it means to be a survivor.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: grammar, spelling, structure, who won't judge and who can be patient with me
Preferred Form of Communication: penana pm or email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Google Docs or penana beta system
Deadline: no deadline as long as it's in a resonable time frame
Title of Piece: Acolytes: A Caste for Control
Genre(s): Science Fiction, Dystopia, Action, Young Adult, Military
Link: https://www.penana.com/story/1290/acolytes-a-caste-for-control/toc
Rating: PG - PG13+
Summary/Description: Check the link above.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Plot holes, Characters, other issues you notice
Preferred Form of Communication: Penana or email
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: Email.
Deadline: None.
I'm happy to trade critiques. My story is 86K, so I'm willing to critique stories of similar length. I prefer Science Fiction, but I'm open-minded. I generally take a couple of months to get feedback to you, so I would expect a similar response.
PM me for my email.
Title of Piece: Virulent
Genre(s): horror suspense
Rating:pg13
Summary/Description:
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: Overall impression. Not entirely focused on grammar right now, just, does it make sense, can you follow it?
Preferred Form of Communication: Email [email protected]
http://www.penana.com/story/1604/virulent/toc
Title of Piece: Fallen (and the sequel)
Genre(s): Horror, Suspense
Rating: PG13
Summary/Description: A story about a girl who gets entangled into a lot of trouble. The story is not only about her, though. It has some true facts about religion and Hell.
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: I am not very good with grammar. It seems no matter how much I correct, there is still something missing. I also have a hard time with some scenes (for example, the fighting scenes).
Preferred Form of Communication: Email or Penana PM
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: I don't really care.
Deadline: There is no deadline
Title of Piece: Metal and Muscle
Genre(s): Steampunk, Dystopian, Adventure, Romance, Young Adult (mixed together)
Rating: PG13
Summary/Description: Flair is well known throughout Pangea Ultimatum as being the best mechanic, captain, and pilot. Of course, she's also a cyborg. When a handsome stranger named Kane requests her services, she's pulled into a government conspiracy, biological testing, and a war between people and monsters. Trapped in a web of lies, will she be able to trust anyone or will she be stabbed in the back by the people she trusted most?
Plunge into the world of Pangea Ultimatum in the first book of the Clockwork Chronicles. (Copied from story description)
Looking for a Beta Who Can/Will: I want the reader to look at the overall story, but also grammatical and sentence phrasing. I also want to here how I can better improve my ability to slowly write character growth and how to better develop my characters.
Preferred Form of Communication: PM on Penana, review on Penana, or email to my professional email ([email protected]).
Preferred Form of Beta-ing: On Penana
Deadline: Whenever you'd like to read it, sooner rather than later. I need to know if I should even continue it.