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Now then, this seems to be an interesting story. I do feel for poor Damian. No one wants to ever witness that happen. His father, however, he's just a terrible man, huh? I will congratulate you and your co-writers for making this story. I will also point out, just to help, the use of punctuation. Some of your sentences appear to be runons and could use a period or semicolon. Other than that, keep up the good work!
-Tenshi