Thank you! I love that you're sharing your thoughts and what my story is putting you through. And don't worry about the swearing, it doesn't bother me. Lol, I mean, just look at Kaylee. She can't even talk without swearing.

@JinxedFantasyXOXO, Honestly, I trust people more who swear cause I feel like they're more authentic.
I love commenting my thoughts on each and every chapter cause I feel like the author deserves honest feedback. I think you are a raw writer who writes about realistic, flawed characters. I love that so much! Side note: Maybe check out my story Falling? I would really appreciate it. It's similar to yours as far as Sawyer's character goes. 

@hanshy, I will give it a look! I promise