Wow, powerful ending. I'm no longer fucking pissed at Kaylee and Sawyer's whole ass affair. *Sorry for the swear words. I just get excited lol. Love, love, love your story, It evokes so much emotion from me.
Thank you! I love that you're sharing your thoughts and what my story is putting you through. And don't worry about the swearing, it doesn't bother me. Lol, I mean, just look at Kaylee. She can't even talk without swearing.
@JinxedFantasyXOXO, Honestly, I trust people more who swear cause I feel like they're more authentic. I love commenting my thoughts on each and every chapter cause I feel like the author deserves honest feedback. I think you are a raw writer who writes about realistic, flawed characters. I love that so much! Side note: Maybe check out my story Falling? I would really appreciate it. It's similar to yours as far as Sawyer's character goes.
*Sorry for the swear words. I just get excited lol. Love, love, love your story, It evokes so much emotion from me.
I love commenting my thoughts on each and every chapter cause I feel like the author deserves honest feedback. I think you are a raw writer who writes about realistic, flawed characters. I love that so much! Side note: Maybe check out my story Falling? I would really appreciate it. It's similar to yours as far as Sawyer's character goes.