I love me some steam punk, and I'm interested to see where this goes...*Warning! Brutally Honest Reviewer Here!* From a writing standpoint, the introduction could stand to hold a little more meat, so to speak. Though I want to continue reading, it's to learn details of the narrative, not necessarily because the story has captured me yet. I'll continue though, and let you know where I am as I go along. Solid start!
From a writing standpoint, the introduction could stand to hold a little more meat, so to speak. Though I want to continue reading, it's to learn details of the narrative, not necessarily because the story has captured me yet. I'll continue though, and let you know where I am as I go along. Solid start!