I'm invested with Catarina's struggles and, by extension, her grandmother and what happens to her. But the world-building/setting has yet to be totally fleshed out. This chapter has me curious about the lottery dynamics and the other characters, and I'm invested enough to want to continue reading.
I hope you'll continue publishing issues, because I'd like to put forth a more critical review once I've finished.
I still can't believe a PROFESSIONAL WRITER read my thing! I was so excited when I saw this, I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to reply, I've been kind of offline. Thank you so much!!! It was such a joy to find! I definitely plan on continuing the story, and have about 3 chapters in desperate need of editing. I'd absolutely love for you to give me a more critical review, and the thought of someone just finishing my book is Crazy! thanks again aaaaaa <3
Oh my gosh this is so intense. Is Catarina going to end up on earth? Or is she going to face some sort of conflict in this moon colony? I'm just wondering, you know. The description was very vague. Do you know what you want your conflict to be, or are you writing as you go?
Ahhhhh thank you so much! I'm so lost on the description. I have a very detailed outline of what's going to happen though. I don't want to spoil it in the comments, but I will message you the spoilers! Thank you so much for reading!
I hope you'll continue publishing issues, because I'd like to put forth a more critical review once I've finished.
Best of luck!