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Blondemaverick

I'm invested with Catarina's struggles and, by extension, her grandmother and what happens to her. But the world-building/setting has yet to be totally fleshed out. This chapter has me curious about the lottery dynamics and the other characters, and I'm invested enough to want to continue reading.

I hope you'll continue publishing issues, because I'd like to put forth a more critical review once I've finished.

Best of luck!

3 years ago

mariasm300

I'm so sorry I've only gotten to this now, thank you so much! I definitely plan on putting out new chapters! I have about three chapters done, but in need of a lot of editing. This was really super exciting to read, thanks again, and I'd love to hear a more critical review. If you want, I can add you to the google docs :)

2 years ago

mariasm300

I still can't believe a PROFESSIONAL WRITER read my thing! I was so excited when I saw this, I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to reply, I've been kind of offline. Thank you so much!!! It was such a joy to find! I definitely plan on continuing the story, and have about 3 chapters in desperate need of editing. I'd absolutely love for you to give me a more critical review, and the thought of someone just finishing my book is Crazy! thanks again aaaaaa <3

2 years ago

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