First of all, I'd like to say that this is very well written.
Secondly, because it was well edited I could read it quite easily which added to my reading enjoyment.
Thirdly you got your feeling across, which I think is important in works like this. It takes a lot of guts to post something like this and I applaud you for that.
Forthly I genuinely enjoyed reading this which is a rarity, because I generally don't enjoy reading nowadays unless I really, really like it.
Normally when I review things I feel the need to sugarcoat the review as to not hurt the feelings of the author. However this review has zero sugar coating and I think you did a really good job with this piece.
Your writing is really nice and I think I'm interested in more of your stories now, due to how like the way you write.
Awe thank you so much! It was super difficult to write, and I have been editing it none stop for a few months now. I am so glad you liked it! :) Thank you.
Secondly, because it was well edited I could read it quite easily which added to my reading enjoyment.
Thirdly you got your feeling across, which I think is important in works like this. It takes a lot of guts to post something like this and I applaud you for that.
Forthly I genuinely enjoyed reading this which is a rarity, because I generally don't enjoy reading nowadays unless I really, really like it.
Normally when I review things I feel the need to sugarcoat the review as to not hurt the feelings of the author. However this review has zero sugar coating and I think you did a really good job with this piece.
Your writing is really nice and I think I'm interested in more of your stories now, due to how like the way you write.
- Kat
I can tell you spent a lot of time on it. It's quite well crafted.