First of all, I'd like to say that this is very well written.

Secondly, because it was well edited I could read it quite easily which added to my reading enjoyment.

Thirdly you got your feeling across, which I think is important in works like this. It takes a lot of guts to post something like this and I applaud you for that.

Forthly I genuinely enjoyed reading this which is a rarity, because I generally don't enjoy reading nowadays unless I really, really like it.


Normally when I review things I feel the need to sugarcoat the review as to not hurt the feelings of the author. However this review has zero sugar coating and I think you did a really good job with this piece. 


Your writing is really nice and I think I'm interested in more of your stories now, due to how like the way you write.



- Kat