Oh my God... I don't know how to categorize this story as - cute? scary? I'm at a loss of words, to be honest.
Okay, so, the first half was sweet, the way a 'wolf' and a 'human girl' befriend each other pushing away their loneliness. Though, I'd admit that the way Samuel's thought's were going in the darker direction was seeping doubt into me and I was like, "maybe this girl (I think her name is... Sapphire?) had done something in the past that's why Samuel turned into a wolf"
Just a thought.
And then when I thought that the wolf's feelings would turn him back into a human, voila! The second half turned out to be a moment of bloodshed!
So overall, I liked the sudden twist in the story (though a it creepy, lol) and the way the wolf's feeling's of love and guiltiness crushed him.
Though I would have loved if you could explain a bit more as to 'why' he killed his crush.
XD Yeah...I figured I should have put a bit more explanation as to why he killed his crush, but first I thought that what the second paragraph after the horizontal line is implying would be enough to explain that he lost control. I guess I should have explained a bit why he was so xD
Okay, so, the first half was sweet, the way a 'wolf' and a 'human girl' befriend each other pushing away their loneliness. Though, I'd admit that the way Samuel's thought's were going in the darker direction was seeping doubt into me and I was like, "maybe this girl (I think her name is... Sapphire?) had done something in the past that's why Samuel turned into a wolf"
Just a thought.
And then when I thought that the wolf's feelings would turn him back into a human, voila! The second half turned out to be a moment of bloodshed!
So overall, I liked the sudden twist in the story (though a it creepy, lol) and the way the wolf's feeling's of love and guiltiness crushed him.
Though I would have loved if you could explain a bit more as to 'why' he killed his crush.
Wonderful story and thank you for participating!
Thanks, and you're welcome! :3