I was actually caught quite off guard by Clementine being the villain. I expected it to be the king and the way you displayed her power and described her was phenomenal! I also thought the idea with the kiss and it making them want her even as they died by her hand was genius! I enjoyed your story! Thank you for sharing it!
Oh my goodness, thank you so much for your comment! I honestly kinda rushed it a bit since it was around 11 at night and i was feeling pretty tired, but I’m glad it came out good to you!
@coolgirl132 , It didnt seem rushed at all! Sometimes writing when tired is the best thing and possibly the strangest. I have some strange short stories that attest to that!