Well you certainly nailed an emotional response from me describing the scene. Aaron disgusts me and the protagonist got me so fangry. Shes stupid.. and then tries to be threatening. I hope you kill her off.
Oh gosh that was really good. I like the characters and the way you described the type of person Aaron was. I think the way the characters act is also really realistic. I can't wait to hear more of this.
Thank you, it's appreciated! Updates should be relatively frequent, since these chapters have been on my computer for two years and I'm just now deciding to spiff them up and post them. Glad to see that people like it so far!