But to be honest, you need to work on your punctuation and your way of telling the story. You need to be a little more descriptive about the mushroom boys and the criminal.
If I'm being completely honest the summary was pretty great but I do have a question I didn't quite understand what you meant by mushroom boys. Are they mushrooms that are boys or are they boys that like mushrooms? Overall that sounds like a great plot writing an apocalypse story is really hard and yo idea sounds amazing I can't wait to read it
Oh, I'm glad you liked the idea. What I meant by mushrooms boys was that they were mushrooms. The story takes place in a world of mushroom people. They look exactly like mushrooms, but with faces and little stubby hands and legs.
But to be honest, you need to work on your punctuation and your way of telling the story. You need to be a little more descriptive about the mushroom boys and the criminal.