@Priya, yeah, there ya go, I fixed it, thank you for pointing that out, I guess I have just busy super busy and haven't bothered to really go through and edit everything.
@Priya,I am glad you like the story. I am very excited for this one, It has been my favourite as far as t]plot a stuff that I have written, not just on here. I hope you continue to read and enjoy reading it as much I do writing it.
Not a problem
Just telling my thoughts