Also this story is really detailed and good. I can't decide whether to be a co-writer or a beta-reader for this one. Keep it up, and enjoy your passion for writing with others.
You have really good description in this one. I didn't have a firm grasp of going on, and it was hard for me to get into it, but that is more of a personal preference of story rather than you're writing. It is very good, keep it up!
Thank you, I do appreciate that you have taken time out to read my stories. This was basically a ramble of a writer that is in a room. He or she is just speaking about their surroundings. They are describing all these things around them and making excuses. They choose to be in this room in order to write yet, in the end, they wrote nothing.