I think you did a great job on this. I'm interested to see how this tense relationship turns into a romantic one.
As someone who read the first version I have to say that December is a more developed character and isn't overshadowed by Brooke.
Not a big fan of Pierre's character, maybe because he has some tropes you see a bit often. But since it's only chapter 3 I'm sure you as the author will be able to evolve his character more. I have faith in you :D
As someone who read the first version I have to say that December is a more developed character and isn't overshadowed by Brooke.
Not a big fan of Pierre's character, maybe because he has some tropes you see a bit often. But since it's only chapter 3 I'm sure you as the author will be able to evolve his character more. I have faith in you :D