There's something about the odd iterations of the Dolls that I absolutely love. Some grammatical errors but your forward was well placed and they didn't keep me from enjoying the overall work. The spacing of emotion is strange as well, whether that's stylized or not could be up for debate but I find it unnervingly pleasant considering the nature of some of the characters and their lack of understanding toward emotion. A rich world that reminds me of a futuristic wonderland, madness included. I'd like to see the grammatical errors dealt with when you have the time, but again, there is no rush as the work is well done in it's current execution. Keep at it!