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Nessa Rozero
What an interesting, bittersweet read. I can’t quite place my finger on the odd sensation I felt while reading this, kind of like I wanted the story to keep on going, to know more, to see how the characters move on from this point, but at the same time the ending was just perfect and there is no need to know any further details – if that makes sense. XD Overall, I liked it. Also thought the song complimented this little piece very well and sets the tone even more.
Coen Wonder
Thank you for your comments:)! Actually you spelled out what I was trying to achieve when I was writing this piece! And I am glad that you liked it!
Nessa Rozero
@Coen Wonder, You're welcome! And yes, I certainly did and am looking forward on reading the other stories soon~
Coen Wonder
@Nessa Rozero, thank you so much! I will check out your stories when I have the chance too!
Nessa Rozero
@Coen Wonder, There is no obligation, but thanks!
Emoddess
I actually like how this story unfolds and it gives some sort of feeling when I listened to the song. Also, I like that quote about that one percent thing, I thought it was a meaningful and nice touch. Keep it up! :D
Coen Wonder
Thanks! Hope it gives you some inspiration:)
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