@wnnovel maybe it is just me, but towards the end of chapter two I found it a bit awkward for the lettering/font to take a sharp turn. If that's your style of bringing the reader's attention to a key element in the story, that would be okay.
You’re right about this. Actually, it’s is a technical issue. It happens when I change positions of sentences in the story by cut and paste, but for some reason, when I paste, the font become bigger. I tried few things to fix it but couldn’t =_=; but thanks for reminding me! :) I’m planning on editing the chapters once I finish the story.