I like it, but one critique -- you should expand your sentence variation and there are some issues with your dialogue tags.
Brief example: {"Yes you are sleeping at our place." Matt said suddenly.} Okay sentence, needs a comma after "Yes" but the point I'd like to emphasize is the end of that quote. Instead of having a period, in dialogue, you use a comma to end a quote when you are continuing the sentence on with a dialogue tag - in this case, "Matt said suddenly."
Another example, where it gets a little more tricky: {"Hunter, are you listening?" Asked Mimi...} Now, no comma is used in this case, but lowercase the A in Asked.
Well, I was only ten. I guess it just happened. I thought it was too cliche to make the werewolf despise the vampire and vise versa. So, the werewolf and the vampire don't like each other, but they have each other's backs. Despite their differences.
Brief example: {"Yes you are sleeping at our place." Matt said suddenly.} Okay sentence, needs a comma after "Yes" but the point I'd like to emphasize is the end of that quote. Instead of having a period, in dialogue, you use a comma to end a quote when you are continuing the sentence on with a dialogue tag - in this case, "Matt said suddenly."
Another example, where it gets a little more tricky: {"Hunter, are you listening?" Asked Mimi...} Now, no comma is used in this case, but lowercase the A in Asked.