Oh my god, the ending to this chapter is so beautiful. I think I may have a tear welling up in my eye for no reason :(( Your writing is seriously affective and effective. The timing was so right on. I'm getting chills.
Incredible... I hate reading (surprisingly enough) but I love writing... I don't even know how I started reading this, but this SERIOUSLY has my attention! This is by far one of the most interesting things I've read. And it's so well put together, at least, it is in my limited opinion and knowledge. Keep writing!
Keep writing!