Whoa! The ending is so suspenseful! Also, I really like this chapter, and there's some bits that's funny to me - conversation wise and that's nice. A little humor is always appreciated in this. Oh yeah, I noticed the use of Nibiru. I hope he isn't some new guy but is actually Nebiru, so yeah maybe that's a tiny bit of spelling mistake on that. Just thought I'd point that out! Scrolling down now~