Love Amon's declaration of love for her because like wow finally he told her. I get how she felt based on what Fay interpret but Andromeda's stubborn and prideful. Also, isn't Medea that hellhound that helped Fay in Book 1? Wow she must have lived in the ancient times if Andromeda and Amon had met her.
And oh, how painful her words towards him was. I noticed a few errors grammatically though, that while isn't a huge bother is a little noticeable. Do you mind if I make some correction suggestions in the suggest edits option? Great job overall, as usual :)
Hey, I'd love that. I am SO sorry for the typos :P I've gone back over and ammended the points you picked up on, plus a couple others, and done it with the next two chapters I've posted.
I always get excited when I see your comments and get to hear your feedback. It's really awesome!
And oh, how painful her words towards him was. I noticed a few errors grammatically though, that while isn't a huge bother is a little noticeable. Do you mind if I make some correction suggestions in the suggest edits option? Great job overall, as usual :)
I always get excited when I see your comments and get to hear your feedback. It's really awesome!
I'll be looking forward to them :)