Well because I HAVE BEEN SOOOO CAUGHT OFF GUARD WITH THIS CHAPTER. LIKE, EVERY SINGLE THING IS SO UNPREDICTABLE AND I GET SO IMMERSED AND ENTHRALLED IN THIS WORLD YOU CREATED FOR FAY AND WHATEVER THAT IS GOING ON. IT'S HARD TO STOP. Not that I wanted to, because wow, I probably have said it before, and I'll say it again: This story, it's good stuff.
Motep? Motep. I didn't think that she'd find him there. I gotta guess the rest of the team is there too, or maybe be fell away from them and found her instead, I don't know. I could barely guess anymore because I don't know which will hit the jackpot.
Also, I'd just like to say that I love your descriptions! You really do have a talent enhancing the settings in words that it's nice and also made me feel in awe when picturing it. For example, those scenes about the ruins and unfinished things? Yeah, it felt haunting and sorrowful to me - that's the word that come close to what I really felt. It was kinda sad, too. And about Amon (poor guy, I still don't know what's the matter with him) and Cerberus (I like knowing this actually!! It made me went 'whoa' for some reason lol)
Andromeda is still being shady, everyone is being shady and I totally could relate to Fay in terms of her being confused and debating whether this was reality or just remnants of memories. Also, before I forget, I suppose there's a hint now that Lupus and Calypso does play a role in whatever this is going on (or had gone on - time is pretty warped where Fay is?) and that thing when Amon went to Athena's statue and him rambling about being warned by her and another guy - literally all my questions had been addressed in this chapter, especially the second paragraph of Fay's part so I'm not even gonna comment on that because I trust you'll answer them in the later chapters. But just, wow. Your story never fail to amaze me. Great job! :D
Why? You may ask.
Well because I HAVE BEEN SOOOO CAUGHT OFF GUARD WITH THIS CHAPTER. LIKE, EVERY SINGLE THING IS SO UNPREDICTABLE AND I GET SO IMMERSED AND ENTHRALLED IN THIS WORLD YOU CREATED FOR FAY AND WHATEVER THAT IS GOING ON. IT'S HARD TO STOP. Not that I wanted to, because wow, I probably have said it before, and I'll say it again: This story, it's good stuff.
Motep? Motep. I didn't think that she'd find him there. I gotta guess the rest of the team is there too, or maybe be fell away from them and found her instead, I don't know. I could barely guess anymore because I don't know which will hit the jackpot.
Also, I'd just like to say that I love your descriptions! You really do have a talent enhancing the settings in words that it's nice and also made me feel in awe when picturing it. For example, those scenes about the ruins and unfinished things? Yeah, it felt haunting and sorrowful to me - that's the word that come close to what I really felt. It was kinda sad, too. And about Amon (poor guy, I still don't know what's the matter with him) and Cerberus (I like knowing this actually!! It made me went 'whoa' for some reason lol)
Andromeda is still being shady, everyone is being shady and I totally could relate to Fay in terms of her being confused and debating whether this was reality or just remnants of memories. Also, before I forget, I suppose there's a hint now that Lupus and Calypso does play a role in whatever this is going on (or had gone on - time is pretty warped where Fay is?) and that thing when Amon went to Athena's statue and him rambling about being warned by her and another guy - literally all my questions had been addressed in this chapter, especially the second paragraph of Fay's part so I'm not even gonna comment on that because I trust you'll answer them in the later chapters. But just, wow. Your story never fail to amaze me. Great job! :D