So. Good. Your own characterization is damn perfect, and your sequencing is incredible! I haven't sat down to read a novel (or something like it) in quite some time, but I really enjoy my time pouring over your very well-chosen words. Keep it up!
Thank you thank you thank you!!! This means so much because I was having difficulty with a couple of the characters in this piece! I so appreciate the encouragement.
Your own characterization is damn perfect, and your sequencing is incredible! I haven't sat down to read a novel (or something like it) in quite some time, but I really enjoy my time pouring over your very well-chosen words. Keep it up!