Wow. Love it, and even in the midst of the wolves battling each other, I love how Mel has that humorous streak to me with the way she handles things. There's a bit of grammar mistakes but you could easily fix that later. But as usual, your flow of writing is great and easy to visualise. Andromeda is being awaken within Fay and someone else is controlling Ryan? Also, Abe! Whew. This is one of the things to look forward to!