I like it but I find myself being confused and maybe just wanna clarify over a few things.
The prologue actually shows the first time Abe and Fay met, right? And then this current chapter kinda insinuates that they've known each other for quite a while (like years or months) or is it like a few days after their initial meeting? It's just that they seemed pretty close as partners and then there's the mention of broken trust and 'old friend'. (which made me really curious and I need to know what happened haha). I just wanted to get the time frame correct and maybe ease my curiosity over it.
Okay so I know Fay was a human and then she turned into werewolf (I'm not sure if she was bitten or is a half hybrid but keep the info coming haha. The little things that you reveal about her and her past helps to get to know the character. I wonder how did Abe get to be what he is, hmm. Cause it's mentioned that he's immortal - I wonder if he's from an ancient civilization or if he's from the modern world as Fay but his kind is immortal.
So, I've ammended the start to clarify that two years have passed. Forgot to add that before :D. As for what Abe is you will learn what he is, and where he comes from.
The prologue actually shows the first time Abe and Fay met, right? And then this current chapter kinda insinuates that they've known each other for quite a while (like years or months) or is it like a few days after their initial meeting? It's just that they seemed pretty close as partners and then there's the mention of broken trust and 'old friend'. (which made me really curious and I need to know what happened haha). I just wanted to get the time frame correct and maybe ease my curiosity over it.
Okay so I know Fay was a human and then she turned into werewolf (I'm not sure if she was bitten or is a half hybrid but keep the info coming haha. The little things that you reveal about her and her past helps to get to know the character. I wonder how did Abe get to be what he is, hmm. Cause it's mentioned that he's immortal - I wonder if he's from an ancient civilization or if he's from the modern world as Fay but his kind is immortal.