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Emoddess
@Imaginekta, I agree with @Booksarecool21. But in my opinion, everyone has their own way of writing the angles of how their story goes and I really like this story so far. Can't wait to know what happens next!
8 年前回覆
Imaginekta
Thank you! :) I have a couple ideas planned for the next update ;)
8 年前回覆
booksarecool21
Loooooove this though i think that maybe you are running into the action too fast. make it so that Cassidy doesn't speculate that her deranged sister is kidnapped or whatever until she sees more signs of magic. Then you could have her freak out, maybe while waiting for her friend to come out of a shop at the mall, and sprints the long way home.
8 年前回覆
Imaginekta
Thanks! Yeah, my stories are too fast paced...it's a bad habit...I'm definitely going to fix that soon!
8 年前回覆
booksarecool21
@Imaginekta,actually the fact that your stories are fast paced is a really good thing, its just that you need to know when to slow it down. ill help with that as you go on with this story
8 年前回覆
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