Hi. I love the story. I love how you controlled the flow but there are some spelling and grammar mistakes. If you do correct them though I'm sure it will make your story much more beautiful than it already is. Keep writing!
@rosemill2017, I'm sorry if you thought I was calling them stupid. These mistakes are completely normal. Heck- I still make them most of the time. Don't be discouraged by it. I do look forward to reading more of your stories.