I enjoyed this chapter as well and spotted no errors on the first read-through. I should elaborate on my first review that it would be interesting to see a memory of his as opposed to a blatant interview style review. I'd be interested in getting a taste for an incident in his life that led him to be as jaded as he is now.
Thank you! I will be revealing as the story progresses exactly what happened to poor young Graham, but it's not my style to reveal too much too early with my characters ;)