Nice opening, I'd say. I noticed some minor grammar mistakes (but then again, don't we all do them?) but it's not too apparent where it's unbearable to read so you're fine.
Also, the scenes where you described about students and the disciplinary stuff kinda reminded me back in high school where things like that certainly happened. It's almost eerily similar haha but it's also good because it's pretty relatable. I also like those last sentences because it seemed like the focal point of the story where you brought the readers to the main point of the beginning of your piece. I thought that was good.
Also, the scenes where you described about students and the disciplinary stuff kinda reminded me back in high school where things like that certainly happened. It's almost eerily similar haha but it's also good because it's pretty relatable. I also like those last sentences because it seemed like the focal point of the story where you brought the readers to the main point of the beginning of your piece. I thought that was good.
And no problem, I'll try my best to help you out on it if I can :)