Oh my God. That was sooo sad. When I reached the end, I had tears in my eyes. Poor, poor Gil. Oh and poor, Noah. The way you portrayed everything. The way you wrote her feelings, the way you wrote the scenes out, it was amazing. I simply adored it. Beautiful, beautiful and beautiful. Amazing, brilliant and beautiful. It was so heart touching. I could actually see it all happening. Wow. Just wow.
Your writing style is great and I wish I could write like you someday :)
Sorry for the late reply. Um, I'm not currently active on this site anymore but if you want to see other amazing works in the poetry, story, and photo area, you can find my account on DeviantArt.
http://wordykite.deviantart.com/
I'm sorry to say that this story is a stand alone for right now. I may continue it at some point, but I have a lot on my plate right now. I'm sorry to tell you that.
Beautiful, beautiful and beautiful. Amazing, brilliant and beautiful.
It was so heart touching. I could actually see it all happening. Wow. Just wow.
Your writing style is great and I wish I could write like you someday :)
Please update soon ♥
http://wordykite.deviantart.com/
I'm sorry to say that this story is a stand alone for right now. I may continue it at some point, but I have a lot on my plate right now. I'm sorry to tell you that.
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