Really really good. It is getting suspenseful. The grammar and flow is a lot better in this chapter. I love your story, had gotten a bit busy and couldn't read but glad to be back at it. I really think you should look into grammarly, a free app that helps with writing on the internet. It does spell check and basic grammar. You can pay for more services if you want. I just started using it, so I am recommending it to writers. Also , after you edit your book, you should enter it into one of the writer's digest contest. Or you can enter a work you already have. Deadlines start in September, but they have alot of competitions annually with cash prizes so check it out! Google writers digest and grammarly :)
Oh goodness! I just got a time to get to your message and comments. Sure, I'll look into grammarly. I actually have followed its fan page but never knew before it is actually an app. Lol! Gonna look the writer's digest. Who knows I can get wider audience? Thanks for recommending me that. 😁😁
Sure, I'll look into grammarly. I actually have followed its fan page but never knew before it is actually an app. Lol!
Gonna look the writer's digest. Who knows I can get wider audience? Thanks for recommending me that. 😁😁