Great, so far. Just a few errors and confusing sentences that can easily be fixed. I'm most interested in whichever character is the "bad boy". I'm obsessed with that character and am excited to read it in your stories.
I like it so far! My only thing is that it seems a bit to cliche at the moment: with how she wakes up, talks about her clothing, and so on. But that might just be me.
I'll think about changing it - it's just a habit of mine to talk about the clothes and how she wakes up so I can get more words in. I always try to get at least 1000 words into each upload I send, whether that be on Wattpad or here