Thank the Lord Skylars okay, you kinda broke my soul earlier. I would suggest putting Skylars chapter farther into the book, letting her "death" sink into the reader a little more, as I didn't really have time to mourn her before I was immediately reassured.
Thank you for your comment and criticism! I'm sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner, I was not on the site during the summer. I will take that into account later on, as this is still kind of a draft at this point, allowing me to get criticism from other writers before it is something I may actually publish. Sorry for the long response also 😂
man, is it good to be back!