This story should be in print. My guess is that a smart publisher will be finding this writer very soon, if they haven't already. Penana readers, enjoy Mr. Butlers free read on Penana while you can! He's no amateur. Consistsntly original. Consistantly delivering a great story. I keep thinking this is a screen play ready to be turned into a Netflix series. It would require very little tweeking...
Your focus is really starting to shine. From one scene to the next, the characters are gaining heft. The dark and conster shadow of the perverse bad guy permeates every chapter. It feels effortless and a real pleasure to read. Yummy, really.
I am enjoying how real Harper has become in so few chapters. The briefing with the new partner told us a great deal in a short time. You developed the character into someone we already know, expertly, and within one scene. Hats off! Can't wait to see how the marbles collide a bit further down the reaction chain.
Consistsntly original. Consistantly delivering a great story. I keep thinking this is a screen play ready to be turned into a Netflix series. It would require very little tweeking...
I am enjoying how real Harper has become in so few chapters. The briefing with the new partner told us a great deal in a short time. You developed the character into someone we already know, expertly, and within one scene. Hats off! Can't wait to see how the marbles collide a bit further down the reaction chain.