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ShadowBobcat10
The grammar wasn't there, but the story was good, and it fit with the quote nicely.
7 年前回覆
Virgil Pillay
Hi thanks for the comment. This is actually the first story I have ever written, any feedback on where I went wrong with grammar would be much appreciated. Thanks
7 年前回覆
ShadowBobcat10
@Virgil Pillay, It would be much easier for me to suggest grammar feedback if you made this a separate story and invited me as a beta-reader, which I would recommend. You did a good job. I would love to give you constructive feedback.
7 年前回覆
Virgil Pillay
@ShadowBobcat10,Thanks. took your advice. Looks much better now
7 年前回覆
ShadowBobcat10
@Virgil Pillay, No problem. Any time.
7 年前回覆
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