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Nicholas Scriptor
Quite a writing. Not a horror expert, but that definitely is a decendant of horror, if not a child. Honestly thought someone was gonna be chasing him, so wasn’t expecting the self swap. That’s not a horror i see and here about nowadays. Good to see something other than crazy killers, my story included. Thanks for the introduction of something refreshing, that is, if horror can be truly defined as refreshing.
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Marcelo Blanco
Thank you! I'm glad you think this story is different. Jumpscares and immediate fright aren't really my forte so I opted for something more along the lines of uncanny
1 年前回覆
Jay Ellis
I was hoping that was the direction you were going to take. As soon as they started talking about pushing someone down the stairway, I was like "it would be cool if it were them". I will say that there were some awkward sentences and some past and present tense switches, but overall, I enjoyed the story. Lots of chaos and confusion, and like I said, I really liked the ending. Great job! :)
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Marcelo Blanco
I agree, this one deserves some polishing. I was pressed for time and I didn't wanna miss the deadline. But thank you so much! Your insight means a lot
1 年前回覆
Jay Ellis
@Marcelo Blanco, You're welcome. :) I totally understand about being pressed for time. The story was still pretty good, though.
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