Jay I must appreciate your style of writing. The description just won my heart. I can't wait to read what will happen to Levon. Please, God, don't make him die. The narration fits perfectly.and character development is cool too. Keep up the great work. And the audio version is way too classy and heart-touching. like if I'm watching a movie. Great! Jay! And I'm definitely in love with Levon. The name is so great and feels bold. Nice choice in choosing names.
Thank you. I really appreciate the kind words. I love it when I read that someone gets really attached to a character. Levon seems to be a favorite among many. I guess he's kind of my favorite character too, haha. I'm also ecstatic that you checked out the audio version as well. I put three hard months into the production of it, so it warms my heart to see people enjoying it. I can't wait to make the audio versions for the rest of the chapters, but I want to make sure all the writing is completed and properly polished before I begin production. I would hate to make an entire audio version and then need to change something in the story - thus forcing me to redo the entire audio.
Thank you again. I can't express enough how important this feedback is to me. :)
@Jay Ellis,oh no thank you is needed. Its your deservence. I just want to advice you to keep up the good work and whenever gou need help just tell me... I've got plenty of ideas.
Re-reading to make sure I'm on the right track. Haven't mentioned this before but I love this scene: 😂😂 "So, what you're saying is that we're screwed if anything threatening shows up?""I'm just saying that I hope you brought bullets today.""Thanks, Jake. It's great knowing that I can count on you." Nicolae's just such a cool guy lmao
Holy smokes, the production value of the audio version is way beyond what i was expecting!! There are professional audiobooks that don't put in this much effort and attention to detail--the voice acting, music, and sound effects are all on point!
That is a high compliment. Thank you so much, Maddox. I'm thrilled to see that you came back and checked out the audio version. You didn't have to, but I'm very appreciative that you did, so thank you again. Also, it's great to see you again! Haven't heard nor seen anything from you since the contest you hosted. Hope you're doing well! 😄
Oh goodness, the suspense is thick. Hopefully Levon is not dead. . . . And the audio isn't helping me either because it's making me even more nervous coz it all seems so real!
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Okay.... Calm down..... There are two whole ass chapters so I don't need to panic..... Levon is okay.....
It's these kinds of comments that really make me smile. Thank you again so much for also checking out the audio version. It makes me so happy to hear that I was able to create something that you could visualize so clearly. Definitely the highest compliment I could ever ask for. :)
Few weeks late but I'll comment anyway. This first chapter is awesome. I'm not a major sci fi reader but I'm getting hooked! Everything just flows so perfectly.
Thanks so much! I'm glad that you found it interesting despite sci-fi not being your number one choice in genre. That's actually quite the compliment, I must say. That really boosted my evening. Thank you. Hopefully, I'll be able to still keep you interested with future chapters. :)
And I'm definitely in love with Levon. The name is so great and feels bold. Nice choice in choosing names.
Thank you again. I can't express enough how important this feedback is to me. :)
"So, what you're saying is that we're screwed if anything threatening shows up?""I'm just saying that I hope you brought bullets today.""Thanks, Jake. It's great knowing that I can count on you."
Nicolae's just such a cool guy lmao
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Okay.... Calm down..... There are two whole ass chapters so I don't need to panic..... Levon is okay.....