Oh, and, here are a couple things I’ve noticed; Try to work on not repeating the same words too close in a single paragraph (ex; “stupid rumors”) and try to find a substitute or rearrange the sentence. “Everything” is also singular, so it would be “was” and not “were.” Hope this is helpful ^-^
Whenever someone says to “trust them and ONLY them” — that you can’t trust anyone else fully but them — that’s a big red flag. Kai’s walking into a trap.
Try to work on not repeating the same words too close in a single paragraph (ex; “stupid rumors”) and try to find a substitute or rearrange the sentence. “Everything” is also singular, so it would be “was” and not “were.”
Hope this is helpful ^-^