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NaNa☆
白毛才是正義啊！
2 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
白毛控+1
2 months agoReply
大秦書說人
戰場上的鐘聲
好中二啊
3 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
不知道有沒有人看的出來，我這個是在致敬海明威的《戰地鐘聲》（書名）
3 months agoReply
鈴仙月兔
孩子們猜猜看，誰是牢大
4 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
肯定是⋯⋯等等，哪個牢大
4 months agoReply
原子能
原來圖榭小時候被霸凌過，心疼死我了！難怪他這麼討厭貴族，結果救的小天使就是個貴族，這什麼命運的安排！最後的計畫是什麼啊？「戰場的鐘聲」聽起來就好帶感！潔法點明羅雷爾是貴族身份的時機，恰好在圖榭剛回憶完被貴族欺負之後，這個安排雖然戲劇性很強，但也顯得有些「作者之手」的痕跡，彷彿是為了製造衝突而特意安排的對白。
9 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
羅雷爾小天使wwwwww

至於作者之手的部分，不知道有沒有注意到圖榭其實是看到羅雷爾的臉才想起那貴族的。。
9 months agoReply
黑正
分隔線**好小一個，看漏了幾次🤣
9 months agoReply
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