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一劍傾心 sponsored 500coins for Issue 8!
參加打賞~ 辛苦啦!! 感覺很像原本是歐美的英文故事~ 很特別!!
2 years agoReply
左道
謝謝！😊
今次寫得很開心！是自己回憶的一個小延續。
這故事原本有前篇，主角是皮皮，是個給小朋友的故事（我當年寫給女兒看）。而這篇可以算是續集，只是主角換了小工保奇的獨立故事……
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
@阿掌 你煮西餐有沒有這麼厲害🤣
2 years agoReply
阿掌
！？
2 years agoReply
阿掌
差得遠了，大佬太厲害
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
唯一，老闆娘的角色弱了一些，做為最親近的人，寫一點點出彩的細節，我覺得更圓滿。

後面出現的皮皮，也令短篇節奏太趕了，都是我個人意見，亂說的，可不要不給我吃甜品阿！
2 years agoReply
左道
😅謝謝意見！
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
全部给我来一份，不，再多要一份，外带。

高手出招，果然很是享受，未吃到已经沉醉了。

我要催你不断写写写，不能休息😆
2 years agoReply
左道
😆正努力中！
2 years agoReply
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