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星野維
「不是想要，而是感受。」
這句話說得真好。
3 weeks agoReply
CF LAM
1. 首先是想說出人性入面, 同理心的重要性。想要守護, 是因為能夠感覺他人的痛苦, 並且想要阻止痛苦的產生, 所以才有守護的行為。

2. 另外一點就純粹想秀一下「不是...而是...」, 這個被很多人不齒的句式的正確用法。其實日常生活和寫作, 都有很多場合都需要用到這個句式, 例如文中的這個場合如果不用, 我都不知道要用些什麼連接詞才好。
3 weeks agoReply
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